Re: [Raw] New Version Notification for draft-pthubert-raw-architecture-07.txt

[Fabrice Theoleyre <[e-mail]>]

Hi Pascal,

I just read your draft. 

For the ingress / egress end-systems in section 4.3, shouldn’t you use the term MEP? 
Besides, I have the feeling that MEP should be the hosts at the border of the wireless part: in that way, you focus uniquely on the wireless links to collect all the measurements, etc.
It would be easier to manage. 

What’s your opinion?

Fabrice 






> Le 4 juin 2021 à 15:49, Pascal Thubert (pthubert) <[e-mail]> a écrit :
> 
> Many thanks for your comments Greg!
> 
> I added subsections to section 4.3 of draft-pthubert-raw-architecture 07; can you please have a look?
> 
> Coincidently the new text affects the (todo) section 4.3 of draft-ietf-raw-oam-support.
> 
> Fabrice and all, it would be nice that we sync on this. We might also exchange pieces of text between the 2 drafts.
> 
> Keep safe;
> 
> Pascal
> 
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> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-pthubert-raw-architecture-07.txt
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> A new version of I-D, draft-pthubert-raw-architecture-07.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Pascal Thubert and posted to the IETF repository.
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> Name:		draft-pthubert-raw-architecture
> Revision:	07
> Title:		Reliable and Available Wireless Architecture/Framework
> Document date:	2021-06-04
> Group:		Individual Submission
> Pages:		35
> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-pthubert-raw-architecture-07.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-pthubert-raw-architecture/
> Html:           https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-pthubert-raw-architecture-07.html
> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-pthubert-raw-architecture
> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-pthubert-raw-architecture-07
> 
> Abstract:
>   Reliable and Available Wireless (RAW) provides for high reliability
>   and availability for IP connectivity over a wireless medium.  The
>   wireless medium presents significant challenges to achieve
>   deterministic properties such as low packet error rate, bounded
>   consecutive losses, and bounded latency.  This document defines the
>   RAW Architecture.  It builds on the DetNet Architecture and discusses
>   specific challenges and technology considerations needed to deliver
>   DetNet service utilizing scheduled wireless segments and other media,
>   e.g., frequency/time-sharing physical media resources with stochastic
>   traffic.
> 
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