[regext] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-11

Jürgen Schönwälder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de> Fri, 19 October 2018 08:26 UTC

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From: Jürgen Schönwälder <j.schoenwaelder@jacobs-university.de>
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Date: Fri, 19 Oct 2018 01:26:38 -0700
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Subject: [regext] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-regext-org-11

Reviewer: Jürgen Schönwälder
Review result: Has Nits

Thanks for a concise and well written document. I have not run tools
to validate the XSD and the XML artefacts but the definitions all look
reasonable.

Comment:

- What does the following mean in the definition of e164StringType?

        <attribute name="x" type="token" />

  It is indeed the intention to use "x"? What is the reason for having
  e164Type, why not use e164StringType?

Nits:

- What are "Organization transform commands"? This phrase appears
  several times in 3.4 an it seems this refers to what section 4.2
  describes later on. Well, if you read the document sequentially,
  things are a bit confusing. Perhaps define upfront what transform
  commands are? It might also be that EPP people are used to
  "transform commands" and this just shows my lack of familiarity with
  EPP.

- s/ement/element/

- s/Zero of more <org:status> element/Zero of more <org:status> elements/

[regext] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-re… Jürgen Schönwälder
Re: [regext] Opsdir last call review of draft-iet… Linlin Zhou
Re: [regext] [OPS-DIR] Opsdir last call review of… MORTON, ALFRED C (AL)
Re: [regext] [OPS-DIR] Opsdir last call review of… Linlin Zhou