[regext] Re: [IANA #1393969] expert review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl (xml-registry)

Tim Bray <tbray@textuality.com> Sun, 10 November 2024 01:52 UTC

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 I can’t remember what my comments were and also can’t find evidence in the
datatracker, but this looks OK.

Nit: In 2.1.1.2., the second example doesn’t have a letter prefix on the
lines, unlike most (all?) of the others.  Is this intended?

On Nov 8, 2024 at 12:52:45 PM, David Dong via RT <
drafts-expert-review-comment@iana.org> wrote:

> Hi Tim, Martin,
>
> Just to note, you had last reviewed -15, and it looks like the author had
> addressed your feedback from that review.
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> Best regards,
>
> David Dong
> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
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> On Fri Nov 08 20:25:58 2024, david.dong wrote:
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> Dear Tim Bray, Martin Thomson (cc: regext WG),
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>
> As the designated experts for the ns and schema registries, can you
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> review the proposed registrations in draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl-10 for
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> us? Please see
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> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl/
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>
> The due date is November 22nd.
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>
> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication,
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> we'll make the registration at:
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> https://www.iana.org/assignments/xml-registry/
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>
> Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewer, we’ll act on the
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> first response we receive.
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> With thanks,
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>
> David Dong
>
> IANA Services Sr. Specialist
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>