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[regext] Re: [Ext] Re: [IANA #1393969] expert review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl (xml-registry)

Gavin Brown <gavin.brown@icann.org> Mon, 11 November 2024 06:57 UTC

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From: Gavin Brown <gavin.brown@icann.org>
To: Tim Bray <tbray@textuality.com>
Thread-Topic: [Ext] [regext] Re: [IANA #1393969] expert review for draft-ietf-regext-epp-ttl (xml-registry)
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Hi Tim,

> On 10 Nov 2024, at 04:52, Tim Bray <tbray@textuality.com> wrote:
> 
> I can’t remember what my comments were and also can’t find evidence in the datatracker, but this looks OK. 
> 
> Nit: In 2.1.1.2., the second example doesn’t have a letter prefix on the lines, unlike most (all?) of the others.  Is this intended?

Good catch, I'll fix that.

G.

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