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Re: [regext] WGLC: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-change-poll

"Gould, James" <jgould@verisign.com> Fri, 19 January 2018 17:02 UTC

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From: "Gould, James" <jgould@verisign.com>
To: "Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com>, "'galvin@elistx.com'" <galvin@elistx.com>, "'regext@ietf.org'" <regext@ietf.org>
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Scott,

Thank you for your review and feedback.  I provide my answers to the feedback below.
  
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On 1/18/18, 12:16 PM, "regext on behalf of Hollenbeck, Scott" <regext-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of shollenbeck@verisign.com> wrote:

    > -----Original Message-----
    > From: regext [mailto:regext-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of James Galvin
    > Sent: Friday, January 12, 2018 8:29 AM
    > To: Registration Protocols Extensions <regext@ietf.org>
    > Subject: [EXTERNAL] [regext] WGLC: https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-
    > ietf-regext-change-poll
    > 
    > The document editors have indicated that the following document is ready
    > for submission to the IESG to be considered for publication as a Proposed
    > Standard:
    > 
    > Change Poll Extension for the Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
    > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-regext-change-poll-06
    
    Comments:
    
    There probably shouldn't be any normative language in the abstract. Please change "MAY" to "may".

Done   
 
    Section 3.1.2: does the name attribute for the "custom" case identifier have an i18n considerations?

No, this matches the use of the “name” attribute of the “custom” phase in draft-ietf-regext-launchphase and the use of the “op” attribute of the “custom” operation in draft-ietf-regext-change-poll.  In this case as with the other cases, these are custom identifiers that don’t have i18n considerations.   
    
    Section 5.1: The title of this section is "XML Namespace", but it seems to be conflating a registration request for an XML namespace and the XML Schema described in Section 4. I'm going to recommend registering both the namespace and the schema in the same way it's done in, for example, RFC 5731.

I went ahead and revised the IANA Considerations section to match RFC 5731 and draft-ietf-regext-launchphase.
    
    Scott
    
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