Re: [regext] [SPAM] Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-nv-mapping-00.txt

Scott,

Thanks for the text check and the feedback, we'll update this draft in the later verison.

Regards,
Jiagui Xie

From: Hollenbeck, Scott
Date: 2016-10-27 22:21
To: regext@ietf.org
Subject: [SPAM] Re: [regext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-regext-nv-mapping-00.txt
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
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> This draft is a work item of the Registration Protocols Extensions of
> the IETF.
> 
>         Title           : Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) China
> Name Verification Mapping
>         Authors         : Xie Jiagui
>                           James Gould
>                           Liu Hongyan
> Filename        : draft-ietf-regext-nv-mapping-00.txt
> Pages           : 37
> Date            : 2016-10-25
> 
> Abstract:
>    This document describes an Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP)
> for
>    the provisioning and management of Name Verification (NV) stored in
> a
>    shared central repository in China.  Specified in XML, the mapping
>    defines EPP command syntax and semantics as applied to name
>    verification.

"This document describes an Extensible Provisioning Protocol (EPP) for the provisioning and management of Name Verification (NV)"

I think you're missing the word "mapping" between "(EPP)" and "for".

Scott

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