Re: [regext] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02: (with COMMENT)

"Hollenbeck, Scott" <shollenbeck@verisign.com> Thu, 18 February 2021 15:54 UTC

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Subject: Re: [regext] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02: (with COMMENT)
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[SAH] [snip]

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> COMMENT:
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> 
> Thank you for the work put into this document. I found the document clear
> and easy to read.
> 
> Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would
> be appreciated), and some nits.
> 
> I hope that this helps to improve the document,
> 
> Regards,
> 
> -éric
> 
> == COMMENTS ==
> 
> -- Section 2 --
> Please use BCP14 template (cfr RFC 8714).

[SAH] Will fix.

> -- Section 3.1.1 --
> CIDR RFC 4632 only applies to IPv4... and also uses the words 'prefix length'
> rather than 'bitmask length'.

[SAH] Do you know of an appropriate reference for IPv6? I can change "bitmask length" to "prefix length".

> "2001:db8::0" is not following the RFC 5952 that is RECOMMENDED just a
> couple of paragraphs above ;-)

[SAH] Please explain. What's needed for a fix?

> == NITS ==
> 
> Like Ben Kaduk, I wonder why using a 16-bit value for US-ASCII "('*', US-ASCII
> value 0x002A)"...

[SAH] Will fix.

Scott

[regext] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf… Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
Re: [regext] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-… Hollenbeck, Scott
Re: [regext] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-… Eric Vyncke (evyncke)