[regext] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 18 February 2021 13:39 UTC

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Subject: [regext] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-regext-rfc7482bis-02: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thank you for the work put into this document. I found the document clear and
easy to read.

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
appreciated), and some nits.

I hope that this helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

== COMMENTS ==

-- Section 2 --
Please use BCP14 template (cfr RFC 8714).

-- Section 3.1.1 --
CIDR RFC 4632 only applies to IPv4... and also uses the words 'prefix length'
rather than 'bitmask length'.

"2001:db8::0" is not following the RFC 5952 that is RECOMMENDED just a couple
of paragraphs above ;-)

== NITS ==

Like Ben Kaduk, I wonder why using a 16-bit value for US-ASCII "('*', US-ASCII
value 0x002A)"...