Re: [Roll] I-D Action:draft-ietf-roll-building-routing-reqs-04.txt

Hi Jerry et all,

Thanks for having addressed all comments from various people during  
LC. I made a very final pass and fixed a few minor issues found during  
IDNits (used references, SHOULD not => SHOULD NOT ...), thus this  
revision 05 that I just posted, now ready for publication. This closes  
our series of ROLL routing requirements documents.

Thanks.

JP.

On Feb 3, 2009, at 11:47 PM, Jerald.P.Martocci@jci.com wrote:

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> All,
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> The -04 version of the Building Requirements document has just been  
> posted.  The -04 document incorporates only three minor changes from  
> -03 ...
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> 1) The 'Parallel Download' requirement has been moved from the  
> requirements section of the draft body to Appendix A.  JP had  
> requested this change.  I agreed in that this requirement is not a  
> routing requirement.
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> 2) The 'Security' section of the draft was reworded to discuss  
> network security requirements as they relate to routing.  The prior  
> draft was not clear which of the security requirements were related  
> to routing.
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> 3) I reread the entire draft and cleaned up a few remaining  
> grammatical errors.  I also reordered the requirements in Appendix A  
> in what I believe is a priority order.  they had been in  
> chronological order in the -03 draft.
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> Jerry
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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts  
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> This draft is a work item of the Routing Over Low power and Lossy  
> networks Working Group of the IETF.
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>                 Title           : Building Automation Routing  
> Requirements in Low Power and Lossy Networks
>                 Author(s)       : J. Martocci, et al.
>                 Filename        : draft-ietf-roll-building-routing- 
> reqs-04.txt
>                 Pages           : 29
>                 Date            : 2009-02-03
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> The Routing Over Low power and Lossy network (ROLL) Working Group has
> been chartered to work on routing solutions for Low Power and Lossy
> networks (LLN) in various markets: Industrial, Commercial (Building),
> Home and Urban. Pursuant to this effort, this document defines the
> routing requirements for building automation.
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> Requirements Language
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> The key words "MUST", "MUST NOT", "REQUIRED", "SHALL", "SHALL NOT",
> "SHOULD", "SHOULD NOT", "RECOMMENDED", "MAY", and "OPTIONAL" in this
> document are to be interpreted as described in RFC-2119.
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