Re: [Roll] WG Last Call draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-04

peter van der Stok <stokcons@xs4all.nl> Fri, 15 March 2013 14:16 UTC

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Hi Jonathan,

I have a few editing remarks for mpl-4 document:

  end of page 8, end of Reactive forwarding paragraph. I suggest to 
replace <..... using the Trickle algorithm> by
<.....using proactive forwarding>.

page 11, default value of DATA_MESSAGE_IMIN "10 times the worst-case 
link-layer latency"
given the medium sensing and back-off in the MAC, the worst case 
link-layer latency becomes easily 100 ms, giving a default value of 1 
second or more.
May be you mean the transmission time which has a value of 3 ms ?

page 11, default value of DATA_MESSAGE_K has value of 5, before the 
value of 1 was encouraged. Personally for me, the value 1 seems adquate.

page 15 MPL Seed Info [0..n], page 14 MPL Seed Info [1..n], Given the 
other text with bit i=0 meaning the message with seq nr min-seqno, I 
would suggest MPL Seed Info [0..n-1]

Many thanks for your work,

Peter

JP Vasseur (jvasseur) schreef op 2013-03-15 12:34:
> Dear all,
> 
> All issues raised during the previous WG LC have been successfully
> addressed in draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-04.
> 
> That said, since we made several changes, this starts a 2-week WG LC
> that will end on March 29 at noon ET.
> Thanks.
> 
> JP.
> 
> On Oct 25, 2012, at 8:55 AM, JP Vasseur (jvasseur) wrote:
> 
>> Dear all,
>> 
>> draft-ietf-roll-trickle-mcast-02 has been discussed on the mailing 
>> list and during WG meeting a number of time; the document is stable 
>> and
>> has been implemented. Thus this starts a 2-week WG Last call ending 
>> on Nov 9 at noon ET. Please send your comments to the authors
>> and copy the mailing list and the co-chairs.
>> 
>> Thanks.
>> 
>> JP.
>> 
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