[Roll] Review of draft-koutsiamanis-roll-nsa-extension-02
"Prof. Diego Dujovne" <diego.dujovne@mail.udp.cl> Thu, 18 October 2018 02:38 UTC
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Subject: [Roll] Review of draft-koutsiamanis-roll-nsa-extension-02
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Dear all,
This is the review of draft-koutsiamanis-roll-nsa-extension-02.
Regards,
Diego Dujovne
Review
1. First, I woud say that sections 3, 4 and 5 are mostly concentrated on
the packet replication process. this text can be mostly removed
by referring to the pre-requisites draft on 6tisch.
2. "no TLV have been" should be "no TLV has been"
3. "option is included is shown" should be "option is included, is shown"
4. "is shown further expanded" should be "is shown expanded"
5. The idea "It does not make sense for this information to be
aggregated due to the scalability issue created
by the space required for many IPv6 addresses.
Therefore, the PS MUST NOT be aggregated." is not
clear. can you rephrase this expression? Why should
aggregation be considered first?
6. "For reasons of clarity," -> "For clarity reasons,"
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DIEGO DUJOVNE
Profesor Asociado
Escuela de Informática y Telecomunicaciones
Facultad de Ingeniería - Universidad Diego Portales - Chile
www.ingenieria.udp.cl
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- [Roll] Review of draft-koutsiamanis-roll-nsa-exte… Prof. Diego Dujovne
- Re: [Roll] Review of draft-koutsiamanis-roll-nsa-… Remous-Aris Koutsiamanis