Re: [Roll] Review of draft-koutsiamanis-roll-nsa-extension-02
Remous-Aris Koutsiamanis <aris@ariskou.com> Mon, 22 October 2018 13:20 UTC
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Subject: Re: [Roll] Review of draft-koutsiamanis-roll-nsa-extension-02
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Hello Diego, thank you very much for the review! I will respond to each comment inline.. Best, Aris On Thu, Oct 18, 2018 at 4:38 AM Prof. Diego Dujovne < diego.dujovne@mail.udp.cl> wrote: > Dear all, > This is the review of draft-koutsiamanis-roll-nsa-extension-02. > Regards, > > Diego Dujovne > > Review > 1. First, I woud say that sections 3, 4 and 5 are mostly concentrated on > the packet replication process. this text can be mostly removed > by referring to the pre-requisites draft on 6tisch. > This is true. Since draft-papadopoulos-6tisch-pre-reqs has matured I think I will more carefully review it and keep the minimal amount of contextual information required for this draft to be somewhat individually readable, and will refer to draft-papadopoulos-6tisch-pre-reqs for the rest. > 2. "no TLV have been" should be "no TLV has been" > Thanks, fixed. > 3. "option is included is shown" should be "option is included, is shown" > Thanks, fixed. > 4. "is shown further expanded" should be "is shown expanded" > Thanks, fixed. 5. The idea "It does not make sense for this information to be > aggregated due to the scalability issue created > by the space required for many IPv6 addresses. > Therefore, the PS MUST NOT be aggregated." is not > clear. can you rephrase this expression? Why should > aggregation be considered first? > Thanks, when we changed from using a metric to using a constraint I missed this. I have removed it, it makes no sense for constraints. > 6. "For reasons of clarity," -> "For clarity reasons," > Thanks, fixed. > > > > > > > -- > DIEGO DUJOVNE > Profesor Asociado > Escuela de Informática y Telecomunicaciones > Facultad de Ingeniería - Universidad Diego Portales - Chile > www.ingenieria.udp.cl > (56 2) 676 8125 > _______________________________________________ > Roll mailing list > Roll@ietf.org > https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/roll >
- [Roll] Review of draft-koutsiamanis-roll-nsa-exte… Prof. Diego Dujovne
- Re: [Roll] Review of draft-koutsiamanis-roll-nsa-… Remous-Aris Koutsiamanis