[Roll] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10

Meral Shirazipour via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Fri, 23 April 2021 00:45 UTC

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Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review result: Ready with Issues

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Document: draft-ietf-roll-aodv-rpl-10
Reviewer: Meral Shirazipour
Review Date: 2021-04-22
IETF LC End Date: 2021-03-31
IESG Telechat date: 2021-04-22

Summary: This draft is almost ready to be published as Standards Track RFC but
I have some comments.

Major issues:

Minor issues:
Other than some issues already reported on the list, the draft is a bit hard to
follow, Intro could be improved and the terminology was very long, maybe
presenting terms in category would help.

Nits/editorial comments:

Section B1 says "Reclassified [RFC6998] and [RFC7416] as Informational."
RFC7416 was already Informational. What that a typo?
This is not part of the final RFC - I was just trying to follow the various
diffs of the document.