Re: [Roll] AD Review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-09
Rahul Jadhav <rahul.ietf@gmail.com> Fri, 12 April 2019 04:00 UTC
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From: Rahul Jadhav <rahul.ietf@gmail.com>
Date: Fri, 12 Apr 2019 09:29:56 +0530
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To: Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
Cc: Peter van der Stok <consultancy@vanderstok.org>, draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao@ietf.org, roll <roll@ietf.org>, roll-chairs <roll-chairs@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Roll] AD Review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npdao-09
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Thank you Alvaro for the detailed review. We will handles the fixes and reply to all the concerns/issues mentioned asap. Thanks, Rahul On Fri, 12 Apr 2019 at 2:42 AM, Alvaro Retana <aretana.ietf@gmail.com> wrote: > Dear authors: > > Here's my review of this document. The first part of the document mostly > resulted in nits, but (starting in §4) I then have some major comments
- [Roll] AD Review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient-npd… Alvaro Retana
- Re: [Roll] AD Review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient… Rahul Jadhav
- Re: [Roll] AD Review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient… Rahul Jadhav
- Re: [Roll] AD Review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient… Alvaro Retana
- Re: [Roll] AD Review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient… Rahul Arvind Jadhav
- Re: [Roll] AD Review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient… Rahul Arvind Jadhav
- Re: [Roll] AD Review of draft-ietf-roll-efficient… Pascal Thubert (pthubert)