Re: [rtcweb] Review comments on draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-04

Justin Uberti <juberti@google.com> Wed, 05 July 2017 02:46 UTC

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Subject: Re: [rtcweb] Review comments on draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-04
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Thanks for the review. These issues have all been resolved in the latest
version of the draft, https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-06.

On Sat, Apr 22, 2017 at 12:46 PM, Justin Uberti <juberti@google.com> wrote:

>
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> On Fri, Apr 21, 2017 at 2:07 AM, Magnus Westerlund <
> magnus.westerlund@ericsson.com> wrote:
>
>> Hi,
>>
>> I have review the -04 version of the FEC. I think the document is mostly
>> done. I only have these few comments that should be addressed before going
>> forward.
>>
>> 1. Section 4.2:
>>
>>    Support for redundant encoding MUST be indicated by offering "red" as
>>    a supported payload type in the offer.
>>
>> I think it is unclear what "red" refers to here. This as it is not made
>> clear that RFC 2198 has the media type audio/red and text/red. I think
>> there are two things that would make this clearer. One would be to change
>> "red" into media type "audio/red". The other would be to add the reference
>> afterwards.
>
>
> Adding the reference seems like a good idea. With that, the fact that it
> is audio/red seems implicit.
>
> https://github.com/juberti/draughts/issues/46
>
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>> 2. Section 12.1:
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>> It is missing this normative reference: [3GPP.26.114]
>>
>
> Agreed. I need to remember how to format such non-IETF references.
>
> https://github.com/juberti/draughts/issues/28
>
>>
>> 3. Section 12.1:
>>
>> I think that the following references have usages in the text that make
>> them normative:
>>
>> [RFC7587] and [RFC4867]
>>
>
> Agreed.
>
> https://github.com/juberti/draughts/issues/47
>