[rtcweb] Review comments on draft-ietf-rtcweb-fec-04

[Magnus Westerlund <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

I have review the -04 version of the FEC. I think the document is mostly 
done. I only have these few comments that should be addressed before 
going forward.

1. Section 4.2:

    Support for redundant encoding MUST be indicated by offering "red" as
    a supported payload type in the offer.

I think it is unclear what "red" refers to here. This as it is not made 
clear that RFC 2198 has the media type audio/red and text/red. I think 
there are two things that would make this clearer. One would be to 
change "red" into media type "audio/red". The other would be to add the 
reference afterwards.

2. Section 12.1:

It is missing this normative reference: [3GPP.26.114]

3. Section 12.1:

I think that the following references have usages in the text that make 
them normative:

[RFC7587] and [RFC4867]


Cheers

Magnus Westerlund

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