Re: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt

["Carlos Pignataro (cpignata)" <[e-mail]>]

Thank you, Greg.

I only looked at the update to the last paragraph of Section 6.

Reading through the last paragraph of Section 6, the text is not fully clear. There are a few nits, including a missing article, /as long as/as well as/, /is/are/, and missing preposition which results in an incorrect pointer.

I’d suggest, for your consideration:

OLD:
   Validation of TTL / Hop Limit of the inner IP packet, as long as the
   related considerations for BFD control packet demultiplexing and
   authentication, is performed as described in Section 5 [RFC5881].


OLD:
   Validation of the TTL / Hop Limit field of the inner IP packet, as
   well as the related considerations for BFD control packet
   demultiplexing and authentication, are performed as described in
   Section 5 of [RFC5881].

Best,

Carlos.

> 2020/05/25 午後6:11、Greg Mirsky <[e-mail]>のメール:
> 
> Dear Carlos,
> thank you for your comments and suggestions. I hope that the updated version of the draft addresses your comments. Please let me know whether I've captured them all correctly.
> 
> Dear Jeff and Reshad,
> I believe that all action points from the IESG reviews and discussions are reflected in the current version. I much appreciate your consideration and suggestion on the next steps to progress this document.
> 
> Regards,
> Greg
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> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt
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> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt
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> Name:           draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan
> Revision:       12
> Title:          BFD for VXLAN
> Document date:  2020-05-25
> Group:          bfd
> Pages:          11
> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt <https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12.txt>
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan/>
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> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12 <https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-bfd-vxlan-12>
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> Abstract:
>    This document describes the use of the Bidirectional Forwarding
>    Detection (BFD) protocol in point-to-point Virtual eXtensible Local
>    Area Network (VXLAN) tunnels used to form an overlay network.
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