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Re: [RTG-DIR] [v6ops] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas-11

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sat, 15 December 2018 19:00 UTC

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To: JORDI PALET MARTINEZ <jordi.palet=40consulintel.es@dmarc.ietf.org>, Daniele Ceccarelli <daniele.ceccarelli@ericsson.com>, "<rtg-ads@ietf.org> (rtg-ads@ietf.org)" <rtg-ads@ietf.org>
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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] [v6ops] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-v6ops-transition-ipv4aas-11
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Jordi,

> I will clarify all those aspects. Initially I’d a reference to the RFC7084 in the abstract, but it seems is not accepted by the nits checker, so I’ve removed it. If someone has any suggestion on that, I’m happy to follow it …

You can put the string "RFC7084" in the abstract but not the string "[RFC7084]". The style guide [RFC7322] says "Therefore, the Abstract must not contain citations." Yes, I agree this is confusing. In any case, giving an RFC title in quotes will confuse anybody, I think.

Regards
   Brian

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