Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-extensions-23

"Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com> Mon, 15 April 2019 14:54 UTC

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From: "Les Ginsberg (ginsberg)" <ginsberg@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-extensions-23
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(Resending w corrected address for rtg-dir)

Russ -

Thanx for the review - and the kind words.

   Les

> -----Original Message-----
> From: 7riw77@gmail.com <7riw77@gmail.com>
> Sent: Sunday, April 14, 2019 6:56 PM
> To: rtg-ads@ietf.org
> Cc: rtg-dir@ietfr.org; draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-extensions.all@ietf.org;
> lsr@ietf.org
> Subject: RtgDir review: draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-extensions-23
> 
> Hello,
> 
> I have been selected as the Routing Directorate reviewer for this draft. The
> Routing Directorate seeks to review all routing or routing-related drafts as
> they pass through IETF last call and IESG review, and sometimes on special
> request. The purpose of the review is to provide assistance to the Routing
> ADs. For more information about the Routing Directorate, please see 
> http://trac.tools.ietf.org/area/rtg/trac/wiki/RtgDir
> 
> Although these comments are primarily for the use of the Routing ADs, it
> would be helpful if you could consider them along with any other IETF Last
> Call comments that you receive, and strive to resolve them through
> discussion or by updating the draft.
> 
> Document: draft-ietf-isis-segment-routing-extensions-23
> Reviewer: Russ White
> Review Date: 14 April 2019
> IETF LC End Date: 17 April 2019
> Intended Status: Standards Track
> 
> Summary:
> 
> No issues found. This document is ready for publication.
> 
> Comments:
> 
> This draft is well written and very readable.
> 
> Major Issues:
> 
> No major issues found.
> 
> Minor Issues:
> 
> No minor issues found.
> 
> 
> 😊 /r