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Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-16

Martin Vigoureux <martin.vigoureux@nokia.com> Fri, 25 May 2018 07:58 UTC

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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] RtgDir review: draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-16
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good. thx.

Le 2018-05-25 à 4:56, Greg Mirsky a écrit :
> Hi Martin,
> apologies for the delay. Yes, this text left after active-tails document 
> was spawned. Would the following be acceptable:
>        Poll (P)
> 
>           Set to 1 if the local system is sending a Poll Sequence, or 0 
> if not.
> 
> Regards,
> Greg
> 
> On Fri, May 18, 2018 at 5:35 AM, Martin Vigoureux 
> <martin.vigoureux@nokia.com <mailto:martin.vigoureux@nokia.com>> wrote:
> 
>     Greg,
> 
>     looking back in the doc I found:
>            Poll (P)
> 
>               Set to 1 if the local system is sending a Poll Sequence or
>     is a
>               session of type MultipointHead soliciting the identities
>     of the
>               tails, or 0 if not.
> 
>     This looks to me as not being in line with the rest of the document,
>     especially the part on "MultipointHead soliciting the identities of
>     the tails".
>     Am I right in thinking that this anticipates on
>     draft-ietf-bfd-multipoint-active-tail ?
> 
>     If so, please clarify this in the doc; if not, please correct me.
> 
>     Thanks
>     -m
> 
>     Le 2018-05-15 à 1:09, Greg Mirsky a écrit :
> 
>         Hi Michael,
>         thank you for the most expedient response. Both updates are in
>         the new working version.
> 
>         Regards,
>         Greg
> 
>         On Mon, May 14, 2018 at 3:58 PM, Michael Richardson
>         <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca <mailto:mcr%2Bietf@sandelman.ca>
>         <mailto:mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca <mailto:mcr%2Bietf@sandelman.ca>>>
>         wrote:
> 
> 
>              Greg Mirsky <gregimirsky@gmail.com
>         <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com> <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com
>         <mailto:gregimirsky@gmail.com>>>
>              wrote:
>                   > The text that follows the first sentence in section
>         4.13.1 is the
>                   > replacement of the entire section 6.8.6 of RFC 5880.
>         Would
>              stressing that
>                   > make the relationship more clear, e.g.:
> 
>                   txt> The following procedure replaces the entire
>         section 6.8.6
>              of [RFC5880].
> 
>                   > And the same can be applied to the first sentence in
>         section
>              14.3.3:
> 
>                   txt> The following procedure replaces the entire
>         section 6.8.7
>              of [RFC5880].
> 
>              That seems like good text.
> 
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