Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-carpenter-eligibility-expand-08

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Thu, 31 December 2020 21:59 UTC

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To: Ines Robles <mariainesrobles@googlemail.com>, rtg-dir@ietf.org
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From: Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com>
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Date: Fri, 01 Jan 2021 10:59:19 +1300
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Subject: Re: [RTG-DIR] Rtgdir last call review of draft-carpenter-eligibility-expand-08
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Ines,

Thanks for the review.

On 29-Dec-20 07:19, Ines Robles via Datatracker wrote:
... 
> Nits:
> 
> 1-Abstract:
> 
> apply to one, or at most two, Nominating Committee cycles -> should be added
> consecutive cycles?

OK

> 
> 2-Section 1:
> 
> It would be nice to expand the first time NomCom --> NomCom (Nominating
> Committee)

OK

> 
> 3-Section 2:
> 
> the IESG must consult the 2021-2022 Nominating Committee chair and the
> 2020-2021 Nominating Committee chair and publish a report --> the IESG must
> consult the 2021-2022 Nominating Committee chair and publish a report

We want to consult the previous Chair too, because they are automatically
in the next committee and are well-placed to compare the old and new
procedures.

> 
> 4-Section 4:
> 
> Has been a Working Group Chair or Secretary within .... -> ... IETF/IRTF
> Working Group Chair or Secretary?

This is the IETF NomCom so why would IRTF experience help?
 
> nomcom -> NomCom

OK

Best wishes for 2021!

    Brian