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Re: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-30: (with COMMENT)

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Murray Kucherawy <superuser@gmail.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
CC: "draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model@ietf.org>, "rtgwg-chairs@ietf.org" <rtgwg-chairs@ietf.org>, "rtgwg@ietf.org" <rtgwg@ietf.org>, Chris Bowers <chrisbowers.ietf@gmail.com>, "aretana.ietf@gmail.com" <aretana.ietf@gmail.com>
Subject: Re: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-30: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Murray, 

On 8/12/21, 3:14 AM, "Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:

    Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-30: No Objection

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    COMMENT:
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    I don't think you need the BCP 14 boilerplate in the prose part of this
    document.  You have exactly one of its keywords, at the bottom of Section 4.4,
    and you could find a way to say that normatively without bringing in BCP 14. 
    Your choice, of course.

But we have a number of normative statements in the ietf-routing-policy.yang itself. We think it is better to leave the reference.

Thanks,
Acee

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