Re: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-30: (with COMMENT)

"Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com> Mon, 16 August 2021 03:19 UTC

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From: "Murray S. Kucherawy" <superuser@gmail.com>
Date: Sun, 15 Aug 2021 20:18:47 -0700
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Subject: Re: Murray Kucherawy's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-30: (with COMMENT)
To: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
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I think the BCP 14 citation in the module itself is fine, and probably even
necessary.  It's the prose in the document itself where you could get rid
of it.

But again, up to you.

-MSK

On Fri, Aug 13, 2021 at 1:50 PM Acee Lindem (acee) <acee@cisco.com> wrote:

> Hi Murray,
>
> On 8/12/21, 3:14 AM, "Murray Kucherawy via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org>
> wrote:
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>     Murray Kucherawy has entered the following ballot position for
>     draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-30: No Objection
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>     ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>     COMMENT:
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>     I don't think you need the BCP 14 boilerplate in the prose part of this
>     document.  You have exactly one of its keywords, at the bottom of
> Section 4.4,
>     and you could find a way to say that normatively without bringing in
> BCP 14.
>     Your choice, of course.
>
> But we have a number of normative statements in the
> ietf-routing-policy.yang itself. We think it is better to leave the
> reference.
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> Thanks,
> Acee
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