Re: I-D Action: draft-acee-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-07.txt

tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com> Thu, 02 August 2018 10:46 UTC

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From: tom petch <ietfa@btconnect.com>
To: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: I-D Action: draft-acee-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-07.txt
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Another YANG I-D from the Routing Area; I wonder what I will find if I
browse it:-)

- Abstract contains a [Reference]

- No reference for YANG Tree Diagrams

- No mention of the current YANG 1.1 RFC

- No YANG version statement in the module

- No mention of NMDA in the body of the I-D (but it does appear in the
YANG Module)

- No references for the imported modules and the RFC in question do not
appear in the I-D Normative References

- YANG module references RFC8242 which does not appear in the I-D
Normative References

- RFC 6536 is obsolete

- I wonder at the choice of prefix for this module - since the module is
all about extensions to the rib, then naming it just 'rib' seems
misleading.

Tom Petch