RE: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-06

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Thanks I will fix it in the next revision


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Subject: Genart last call review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-06

Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Ready with Nits

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Document: draft-ietf-rtgwg-uloop-delay-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2017-09-27
IETF LC End Date: 2017-10-04
IESG Telechat date: 2017-10-12

Summary:
The document is ready for publication as a standard track RFC with nits

Major issues:

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments:

1. Abbreviation like RIB and FIB are not expanded 2. In section 9.1 "more simple" should be "simpler"
3. In section 9.1 " does not enough provide enough bandwidth"  to " does not provide enough bandwidth" 4. In section 9.2 "a mechanism where the convergence of the  network upon a topology change is made ordered to prevent transient forwarding loops"  is difficult to read maybe "a mechanism where the convergence of the network upon a topology change is ordered in order to prevent transient forwarding loops"



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