Re: Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-ni-model-08: (with COMMENT)

"Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com> Mon, 05 February 2018 23:12 UTC

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From: "Acee Lindem (acee)" <acee@cisco.com>
To: Mirja Kühlewind <ietf@kuehlewind.net>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: Mirja Kühlewind's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-ni-model-08: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Mirja, 

On 2/5/18, 5:46 AM, "Mirja Kühlewind" <ietf@kuehlewind.net> wrote:

    Mirja Kühlewind has entered the following ballot position for
    draft-ietf-rtgwg-ni-model-08: No Objection
    
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    Two minor editorial comments:
    
    1) Sec 1.2: I'm surprised to see an open issue listed here. Is there already
    any plan to address this somehow or is that listed to inform the reader,
    however, in the second case I would probably rather call it 'limitation' or
    something like this...

I've removed it.
    
    2) Sec 2: "In this document, we consider network devices that support protocols
       and functions defined within the IETF Routing Area, e.g, routers,
       firewalls, and hosts. "
    I assume that this yang module can also be used for routing protocols and
    functions that have not been defined in the IETF?

Yes - but we are only "considering" protocols and functions defined in the IETF. I'll remove "Routing Area". 

Thanks,
Acee