Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-20: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-20: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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# GEN AD review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-18

CC @larseggert

## Comments

### Boilerplate

This document does not use RFC2119 keywords, but contains the RFC8174
boilerplate.

### Inclusive language

Found terminology that should be reviewed for inclusivity; see
https://www.rfc-editor.org/part2/#inclusive_language for background and more
guidance:

 * Term `master`; alternatives might be `active`, `central`, `initiator`,
   `leader`, `main`, `orchestrator`, `parent`, `primary`, `server`

## Notes

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