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Re: Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02

Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net> Fri, 23 June 2017 22:39 UTC

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Subject: Re: Review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-lne-model-02
To: Ravi Singh <ravis@juniper.net>, "rtg-dir@ietf.org" <rtg-dir@ietf.org>
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From: Lou Berger <lberger@labn.net>
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Thanks for the comments, these should be resolved in the next rev.

Lou


On 5/8/2017 2:11 AM, Ravi Singh wrote:
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> Hi
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> I had been designated as the RTG-DIR reviewer for this draft.
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> I’ve reviewed the same.
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> This draft does a decent job of defining the logical-network-element
> module.
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> Some minor comments that should be addressed:
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> a.       Section 1.1: refers to expired drafts.
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> b.      Some TBDs need to be populated:
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>                                        i.            Security
> considerations section
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>                                      ii.            An error-code in
> section 6
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> Regards
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> Ravi
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