Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-30: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-30: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks to Dan Harkins for the SECDIR review.

** Section 5.

   If none of the policy statement conditions
   are satisfied, then evaluation of the current policy definition
   stops, and the next policy definition in the chain is evaluated.

Is it worth mentioning in this paragraph that various implementation specific
optimizations may be possible.  For example, Section 4.2 notes policy match
conditions.  If the match condition is ALL and the first condition is not
satisfied, is it necessary to evaluate the next policy statement?

** Section 8.  The text helpful notes the read sensitivity of
“/routing-policy/policy-definitions/policy-definition” with “Additionally,     
 policies and their attendant conditions and actions should be considered
proprietary and disclosure could be used to ascertain partners, customers, and
supplies.”  It seems like “defined-sets/prefix-sets” could also reveal these
relationships with partners, customers or suppliers.