Re: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-30: (with COMMENT)

Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 12 August 2021 06:25 UTC

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Subject: Re: Roman Danyliw's No Objection on draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-30: (with COMMENT)
From: Yingzhen Qu <yingzhen.ietf@gmail.com>
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HI Roman,

Thank you for your review and comments. Please see my answers inline.

Thanks,
Yingzhen

> On Aug 10, 2021, at 12:31 PM, Roman Danyliw via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> wrote:
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> Roman Danyliw has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-rtgwg-policy-model-30: No Objection
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> Thanks to Dan Harkins for the SECDIR review.
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> ** Section 5.
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>   If none of the policy statement conditions
>   are satisfied, then evaluation of the current policy definition
>   stops, and the next policy definition in the chain is evaluated.
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> Is it worth mentioning in this paragraph that various implementation specific
> optimizations may be possible.  For example, Section 4.2 notes policy match
> conditions.  If the match condition is ALL and the first condition is not
> satisfied, is it necessary to evaluate the next policy statement?

[Yingzhen]: Personally I don’t think it’s really necessary. It’s up to implementations, like in your example, a good implementation will “break” out of the comparison if there is “False” in condition ALL.
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> ** Section 8.  The text helpful notes the read sensitivity of
> “/routing-policy/policy-definitions/policy-definition” with “Additionally,     
> policies and their attendant conditions and actions should be considered
> proprietary and disclosure could be used to ascertain partners, customers, and
> supplies.”  It seems like “defined-sets/prefix-sets” could also reveal these
> relationships with partners, customers or suppliers.

[Yingzhen]: The policy-definition may refer to a prefix-sets, and it definitely reveal more information. You can config a list of prefix-sets, but not use them in any policy definition. 
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