Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-rib-extend-21

Bo Wu via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 06 June 2023 13:37 UTC

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Reviewer: Bo Wu
Review result: Has Nits

Hi,

I have reviewed the document and it is clear written.

Here are two nits commments:

In Section 5. RIB Extension YANG Model
1)
 OLD:
    description
       "This YANG module extends the RIB defined in the ietf-routing
        YANG module with additionalroute attributes.
NEW:
    description
       "This YANG module extends the RIB defined in the ietf-routing
        YANG module with additional route attributes.

2) grouping next-hop is defined but not used, is this intentional?

Thanks,
Bo Wu

Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-yang-r… Bo Wu via Datatracker
Re: Opsdir telechat review of draft-ietf-rtgwg-ya… Acee Lindem