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Henk Birkholz <notifications@github.com> Tue, 10 May 2022 14:57 UTC

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Subject: [sacm] [sacmwg/draft-ietf-sacm-coswid] Fixing remaining issues from IESG eval (PR #50)
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  https://github.com/sacmwg/draft-ietf-sacm-coswid/pull/50

-- Commit Summary --

  * Francesca&#39;s &amp; Roman&#39;s suggestions on improving Section 2.4.
  * yes, it is &quot;installationmedia&quot;, hyphen be gone!
  * Fixed ambiguity of normative version scheme langues
  * moved semver from normative to informative reference
  * fixed global-attributes label snafu
  * fixed the sentences in version-scheme and all missing parentheses

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-sacm-coswid.md (44)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/sacmwg/draft-ietf-sacm-coswid/pull/50.patch
https://github.com/sacmwg/draft-ietf-sacm-coswid/pull/50.diff

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