Re: [scim] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-scim-01-04: (with COMMENT)

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From: Roman Danyliw <rdd@cert.org>
To: Éric Vyncke <evyncke@cisco.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [scim] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-scim-01-04: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Éric!

> -----Original Message-----
> From: iesg <iesg-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of Éric Vyncke via Datatracker
> Sent: Wednesday, October 20, 2021 3:17 AM
> To: The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
> Cc: scim@ietf.org; scim-chairs@ietf.org
> Subject: Éric Vyncke's No Objection on charter-ietf-scim-01-04: (with
> COMMENT)
> 
> Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
> charter-ietf-scim-01-04: No Objection
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> COMMENT:
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Thanks for the review.

> Unsure whether "The currently planned scope of work for the SCIM WG is" is
> meaningful in a WG charter (especially the words "currently" and "planned",
> let's be more assertive).

Fixed.

> The milestones appear really aggressive to the point of being unrealistic ;-)

I hope that isn't the case.  I leave it to the future WG, if chartered, to readjust per their work cadence after a few meetings.

> Sometimes the text use "RFC 7642" (with a space character) but at other times
> "RFC7642".
> 
> Please expand "HR" at the bottom of the charter.

Both fixed.

Regards,
Roman

> -éric
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