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"Sehgal, Anjali" <anjalisg@amazon.com> Fri, 01 March 2024 17:45 UTC

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From: "Sehgal, Anjali" <anjalisg@amazon.com>
To: Roni Even <ron.even.tlv@gmail.com>, "gen-art@ietf.org" <gen-art@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [scim] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-scim-cursor-pagination-02
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Hi Roni,

We have published a new version(-04) of the Cursor Based Pagination Draft to the data tracker that addresses all the concerns raised by you in the email below regarding missing IANA Considerations and Security sections.
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-scim-cursor-pagination/

We have added 3 new sections 
- Section 2.4 Backward Compatibility Considerations
- Section 5 Security Considerations
- Section 6 IANA Considerations

Kindly request you to please review the draft.

Best Regards,
Anjali


On 2023-12-02, 8:54 AM, "Roni Even via Datatracker" <noreply@ietf.org <mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:


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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Almost Ready


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Document: draft-ietf-scim-cursor-pagination-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2023-12-02
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat


Summary:the document is almost ready for publication as a standard track rfc


Major issues:
The document does not have security and iana consideration sections


Minor issues:


Nits/editorial comments:

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