[scim] Genart last call review of draft-ietf-scim-cursor-pagination-02

Roni Even via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 02 December 2023 13:53 UTC

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Reviewer: Roni Even
Review result: Almost Ready

I am the assigned Gen-ART reviewer for this draft. The General Area
Review Team (Gen-ART) reviews all IETF documents being processed
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Document: draft-ietf-scim-cursor-pagination-??
Reviewer: Roni Even
Review Date: 2023-12-02
IETF LC End Date: None
IESG Telechat date: Not scheduled for a telechat

Summary:the document is almost ready for publication as a standard track rfc

Major issues:
The document does not have security and iana consideration sections

Minor issues:

Nits/editorial comments: