Re: [secdir] secdir review of draft-ietf-geojson-03

Tim Schaub <tim.schaub@gmail.com> Thu, 26 May 2016 15:11 UTC

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Thanks for the feedback Melinda.  I put together a pull request with
your proposed changes:
https://github.com/geojson/draft-geojson/pull/205

Tim


On Thu, May 26, 2016 at 12:15 AM, Melinda Shore <melinda.shore@gmail.com> wrote:
> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the
> IESG.  These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the
> security area directors.  Document editors and WG chairs should treat
> these comments just like any other last call comments.
>
> (note: I was assigned the -02 revision of the document, but the -03
> version was just issued and I am reviewing that).
>
> Summary: this document is ready, with minor issues
>
> This document describes a JSON format for representing geospatial
> data.  It recommends a single coordinate reference system and does
> not appear to be readily extensible to other coordinate reference
> systems, but I'll assume that this has been addressed and resolved
> by the responsible AD, etc. if it's actually a problem.
>
> The security considerations section is brief and refers the reader
> to the core JSON specification.  The second paragraph of the
> security considerations sections may have minor issues in that it
> says "if sensitive data requires privacy or integrity protection the
> service must be provided externally."  It may be appropriate, and
> provide additional clarity, to distinguish between protection of
> data in flight and data at rest (the IETF does not typically deal
> with protection of the latter).  It may be sufficient to make the
> word "externally" go away and replace it with something more specific -
> for example,
>     "if sensitive data require privacy or integrity protection
>     those must be provided by the transport, for example TLS or
>     HTTPS."
>
> Otherwise, looks ready.
>
> Melinda