Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-trill-cmt-08

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Tue, 06 October 2015 02:46 UTC

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From: Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com>
Date: Mon, 5 Oct 2015 22:46:06 -0400
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Hi Charlie,

Thanks for the review. You suggested editorials all look reasonable to me.

Donald
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On Mon, Oct 5, 2015 at 9:18 PM, Charlie Kaufman <charliekaufman@outlook.com>
wrote:

> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
> directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
> like any other last call comments.
>
>
> This document specifies an optional new mechanism for trill that supports
> more fine-grained control of the load balancing of multi-cast packets. The
> changes are to the routing protocol and does not make it any more security
> sensitive than it already is and hence introduces no new security issues.
>
>
> Typos:
>
>
> Page 3, Section 1, para 2, line 3: "[RFC6439], provide" -> "[RFC6439]
> provides"
>
> Page 5, Section 1.2, line 1: "of much passionate" -> "of many passionate"
> or "of very passionate"
>
> Page 14, Section 6, Para 2, line 1: "involve with" -> "involved with"
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