Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-trill-cmt-08

Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> Wed, 07 October 2015 19:00 UTC

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Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-trill-cmt-08
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Hi Charlie,

I believe your comments are resolved in the -10 version uploaded today.

Thanks,
Donald
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On Mon, Oct 5, 2015 at 10:46 PM, Donald Eastlake <d3e3e3@gmail.com> wrote:

> Hi Charlie,
>
> Thanks for the review. You suggested editorials all look reasonable to me.
>
> Donald
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>  155 Beaver Street, Milford, MA 01757 USA
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> On Mon, Oct 5, 2015 at 9:18 PM, Charlie Kaufman <
> charliekaufman@outlook.com> wrote:
>
>> I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's
>> ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.
>> These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area
>> directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just
>> like any other last call comments.
>>
>>
>> This document specifies an optional new mechanism for trill that supports
>> more fine-grained control of the load balancing of multi-cast packets. The
>> changes are to the routing protocol and does not make it any more security
>> sensitive than it already is and hence introduces no new security issues.
>>
>>
>> Typos:
>>
>>
>> Page 3, Section 1, para 2, line 3: "[RFC6439], provide" -> "[RFC6439]
>> provides"
>>
>> Page 5, Section 1.2, line 1: "of much passionate" -> "of many passionate"
>> or "of very passionate"
>>
>> Page 14, Section 6, Para 2, line 1: "involve with" -> "involved with"
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