[secdir] SECDIR review of draft-ietf-roll-applicability-ami-12

[Chris Lonvick <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's 
ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. 
These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security 
area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these 
comments just like any other last call comments.

Overall, the document looks great. This is a very information-dense 
document and the authors and contributors have done a wonderful job of 
putting it together. While I do not follow the technology, I was able to 
understand the concepts and I could see that the security considerations 
were appropriate.

Some very small nits that the authors may want to consider:
- the terms DODAG, DIO, and DAO are not expanded anywhere. (Yeah, I know 
I could go look them up... ;-)
- The 2nd paragraph in 9.3 ends with "Known schemes". I figure someone 
was going to write something more there.

Regards,
Chris