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Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-03.txt

Samuel Weiler <weiler@watson.org> Wed, 11 April 2012 19:39 UTC

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From: Samuel Weiler <weiler@watson.org>
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-behave-nat64-learn-analysis-03.txt
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On Wed, 11 Apr 2012, jouni korhonen wrote:

>> I think some Informative references to relevant documents should be 
>> inserted here in order to help readers find relevant information.
>
> Will add references to RFC3315 and RFC3971.

More generally, please add informative citations to all of the docs 
(e.g the ones mentioned in 5.*) -- don't just give us the ID titles, 
actually cite them.

-- Sam

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