[secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-13

Shawn Emery via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Sat, 16 July 2022 19:59 UTC

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Date: Sat, 16 Jul 2022 12:59:49 -0700
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Subject: [secdir] Secdir telechat review of draft-ietf-ipsecme-iptfs-13

Reviewer: Shawn Emery
Review result: Ready

I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors.
 Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
last call comments.

This is a re-review from the last version (12) of the draft.

I agree with the updates and reads better from an already well written document.

Shawn.
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