[secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-temporal-hitless-psm-12.txt
Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi> Wed, 01 March 2017 15:01 UTC
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Date: Wed, 01 Mar 2017 17:01:03 +0200
From: Tero Kivinen <kivinen@iki.fi>
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Subject: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-temporal-hitless-psm-12.txt
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I have reviewed this document as part of the security directorate's ongoing effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. These comments were written primarily for the benefit of the security area directors. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other last call comments. This document seems to be problem statement and requirements document for new MPLS path segment monitoring tool. The title does not really reflect to that and from there it would look more like that this would define that actul hitless path segment monitoring mechanism. As this only provides problem statement and requiremens for it, the title should be changed to say so. The security considerations section just refers to rfc5921 and 5860. As this is problem statement and requirements document, I do not think there is real security considerations in this document, the protocol document based on this might then have more considerations. Nits: The OAM term in the document should be expanded both in the abstract and in the first use. Summary: Ready with nits. -- kivinen@iki.fi
- [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-temp… Tero Kivinen
- Re: [secdir] Secdir review of draft-ietf-mpls-tp-… Kathleen Moriarty