Re: [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc1831bis-10
Robert Thurlow <robert.thurlow@sun.com> Sun, 14 December 2008 17:30 UTC
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Subject: Re: [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc1831bis-10
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Shawn M. Emery wrote: > Editorial comment(s): > > s/them in future/them in the future/ > s/minimum, the/a minimum, the/ > s/in future/in the future/ > s/to used on/to be used on/ Hi Shawn, Thanks for the review, I have made the editorial changes as suggested and will put them in draft 11. Rob T _______________________________________________ secdir mailing list secdir@ietf.org https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/secdir
- [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc1831bis-10 Shawn M. Emery
- Re: [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-nfsv4-rfc1831bi… Robert Thurlow
- [secdir] Review of draft-ietf-mediactrl-mixer-con… Shawn M Emery