Re: [sfc] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-sfc-hierarchical-09: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com> Thu, 21 June 2018 03:19 UTC

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Subject: Re: [sfc] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-sfc-hierarchical-09: (with COMMENT)
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That change works for me.

Thanks!

Ben.

> On Jun 20, 2018, at 1:09 AM, mohamed.boucadair@orange.com wrote:
> 
> Hi Ben,
> 
> Thank you for the comment.
> 
> Please see inline .
> 
> Cheers,
> Med
> 
>> -----Message d'origine-----
>> De : Ben Campbell [mailto:ben@nostrum.com]
>> Envoyé : mercredi 20 juin 2018 05:24
>> À : The IESG
>> Cc : draft-ietf-sfc-hierarchical@ietf.org; Behcet Sarikaya; sfc-
>> chairs@ietf.org; sarikaya@ieee.org; sfc@ietf.org
>> Objet : Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-sfc-hierarchical-09: (with
>> COMMENT)
>> 
>> Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
>> draft-ietf-sfc-hierarchical-09: No Objection
>> 
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>> The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here:
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>> 
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> COMMENT:
>> ----------------------------------------------------------------------
>> 
>> §10: "This document describes systems that may be managed by distinct teams
>> of
>> a single administrative entity."
>> 
>> I had to re-read this a few times to realize you meant distinct teams that
>> are
>> all part of the same entity, not distinct teams each made up of one entity.
>> 
> 
> [Med] We can change this sentence to:
> 
> "This document describes systems that may be managed by distinct teams, which all belong to the same administrative entity."