[sfc] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-sfc-hierarchical-09: (with COMMENT)

[Ben Campbell <[e-mail]>]

Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-sfc-hierarchical-09: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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§10: "This document describes systems that may be managed by distinct teams of
a single administrative entity."

I had to re-read this a few times to realize you meant distinct teams that are
all part of the same entity, not distinct teams each made up of one entity.