Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05
Eric Gray <eric.gray@ericsson.com> Thu, 29 May 2014 21:18 UTC
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From: Eric Gray <eric.gray@ericsson.com>
To: Linda Dunbar <linda.dunbar@huawei.com>, Lucy yong <lucy.yong@huawei.com>, "Jakob Heitz (jheitz)" <jheitz@cisco.com>, Joel Halpern <joel.halpern@ericsson.com>, "Paul Quinn (paulq)" <paulq@cisco.com>
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Subject: Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05
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Linda/Lucy, It's not a beauty contest. There are trade-offs associated with using any of these approaches. If the authors decide to use Lucy's approach, they will need to add a little bit more text to explain the notation (sf1|sf1' meaning two separate nodes providing the same service function, where packets may be processed by either) - as it is not as intuitive as if separate boxes are used in the figure. Your suggestion would require even more additional text, as it is (in effect) applying the same sort of notation recursively - especially if applied to both figures 5 and 6. Either approach would be fine with me, provided the text to make it clear what these figures mean is provided. For other folks - particularly those who understand things better if they are clearly explained pictorially - having the need to add extra text to make the picture itself more understandable may not work that well. I'm personally fine with any of the options discussed so far, and am perfectly happy to let the Editors of the draft make whatever choice they prefer, for whatever reasons they prefer that (or those) choice(s). -- Eric From: Linda Dunbar [mailto:linda.dunbar@huawei.com] Sent: Thursday, May 29, 2014 4:49 PM To: Lucy yong; Eric Gray; Jakob Heitz (jheitz); Joel Halpern; Paul Quinn (paulq) Cc: sfc@ietf.org Subject: RE: Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Importance: High I like the Figures drawn by Lucy. Actually why can't Figure 5 be simplified as enter -->{sf1}-->-{sf2|sf2'|sf2''}->--{sf3}-->-{sf4|sf4'|sf4''}->--{sf5}--> exit ?? Linda From: sfc [mailto:sfc-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Lucy yong Sent: Thursday, May 29, 2014 1:12 PM To: Eric Gray; Jakob Heitz (jheitz); Joel Halpern; Paul Quinn (paulq) Cc: sfc@ietf.org<mailto:sfc@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 For readability on these figures, propose: Figure 5: +-sf2-+ +-sf4-+ | | | | enter -->sf1-->-sf2->--sf3-->-sf4->--sf5--> exit | | | | +-sf2-+ +-sf4-+ Figure 6: +-sf2-+ +-sf4-+ | | | | enter -->{sf1|sf1'}-->-sf2->--{sf3|sf3'}-->-sf4->--{sf5}--> exit | | | | +-sf2-+ +-sf4-+ lucy From: sfc [mailto:sfc-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Eric Gray Sent: Thursday, May 29, 2014 12:54 PM To: Jakob Heitz (jheitz); Joel Halpern; Paul Quinn (paulq) Cc: sfc@ietf.org<mailto:sfc@ietf.org> Subject: Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 HaHa, funny man. :) From: Jakob Heitz (jheitz) [mailto:jheitz@cisco.com] Sent: Thursday, May 29, 2014 1:43 PM To: Eric Gray; Joel Halpern; Paul Quinn (paulq) Cc: sfc@ietf.org<mailto:sfc@ietf.org> Subject: RE: Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Importance: High You could turn the whole picture right by 90 degrees. If you don't like top to bottom instead of left to right, make a note that it's in landscape. --Jakob From: sfc [mailto:sfc-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf Of Eric Gray Sent: Thursday, May 29, 2014 8:31 AM To: Joel Halpern; Paul Quinn (paulq) Cc: sfc@ietf.org<mailto:sfc@ietf.org> Subject: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Paul/Joel, Pretty sure that Figures 5 and 6 don't actually fit the width expected for an Internet Draft (Figure 5 is more than 80 characters wide and Figure 6 is wider still). Depending on how a reader tries to read the draft, this can turn complicated illustrations into a _real_ fun time. :) Also, I am unsure what the figures are trying to convey with some of "dotted lines" crossing the service functions. If the intent is to show that a service function is a virtual instance hosted by some network device, perhaps this will be better shown in a separate figure and this aspect of Figures 5 and 6 can be eliminated? I would suggest replacing Figure 5 with a figure along the lines of: source +-----+ +-----+ | +-->| sf2 +--+ +-->| sf4 +--+ | | | | | | | | | | +------+--+ +-----+ +-->+-----+--+ +-----+ +->+-----+ | | sf1 | +-----+ | sf3 | +-----+ | sf5 | +->| +----->| sf2 +----->| |----->| sf4 +---->| |-+ | | | | | | | | | | | +------+--+ +-----+ +-->+-----+--+ +-----+ +->+-----+ | | +-----+ | | +-----+ | | +-->| sf2 +--+ +-->| sf4 +--+ +----+ | | | | | +-----+ +-----+ V destination Figure 5: Load Balancing (67 characters?) Similarly, I would suggest replacing Figure 6 with a figure along the lines of: source | +-----+-+ +-----+-+ +---+ +-->| sf2 |-|+ +-->| sf4 |-|+ | +---|-->| | || +------>| | || | +------+|---+ +-----+ |+-->+-----+|---+ +-----+ |+-->+-----+ | | sf1 || +-----+ +--->| sf3 || +-----+ +--->| sf5 | +-->| +|------>| sf2 |+---->| ||------>| sf4 |+---->| |--+ | | || +---->| |-+ | || +---->| |-+ | | | | +------+|-|-+ +-----+ |+-->+-----+|-|-+ +-----+ |+-->+-----+ | | | | | +-----+ || | | | +-----+ || | | +------++ | +-->| sf2 |-|+ +-----++ | +-->| sf4 |-|+ +-----+ | | | sf1' | | +-->| | +--->| sf3'| | +-->| | +--->| sf5'| | +-->| +--+ | +-----+----->| |--+ | +-----+----->| |--+ | | | | | | | | | +------+----+ +-----+----+ +-----+ | | +--------+ | V destination Figure 6: Load Balancing and HA (72 characters?) In both cases, the figure has all the same connection complexity (fixed up in a few places), but seems to be less busy. -- Eric
- [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Eric Gray
- Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Jakob Heitz (jheitz)
- Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Eric Gray
- Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Lucy yong
- Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Linda Dunbar
- Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Eric Gray
- Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Eric Gray
- Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Linda Dunbar
- Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Lucy yong
- Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Eric Gray
- Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Jakob Heitz (jheitz)
- Re: [sfc] Figures in draft-quinn-sfc-arch-05 Eric Gray
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