[Sframe] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-sframe-enc-07: (with COMMENT)

Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 04 April 2024 09:40 UTC

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Subject: [Sframe] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-sframe-enc-07: (with COMMENT)
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Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-sframe-enc-07: No Objection

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Thank you for the work done in this I-D. It is *really* well-written and I love
the neat SVG graphics!  Also a good idea to have test data.

While I am not familiar at all about MLS, I wonder whether only using E bits of
the epoch in section 5.2 does not open a window for replay attack? Should there
be some guidance for the minimum amount of E bits ?

Thanks as well to Suresh Krishnan for his int-dir review at:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/review-ietf-sframe-enc-07-intdir-telechat-krishnan-2024-03-29/
and I have read Richard's reply.

Nits:

- be consistent for "hop-by-hop" or "hop by hop"
- expand RTX (and possibly FEC) at first use
- perhaps define 'frame' (I understood it like a MPEG frame but could be wrong)