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Re: [shim6] I-D Action:draft-ietf-shim6-multihome-shim-api-12.txt

Brian E Carpenter <brian.e.carpenter@gmail.com> Sat, 09 January 2010 19:51 UTC

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This is looking good to me.

Just one editorial point I noticed, section 10.2 discusses SIIT, which
is deprecated. The intended replacement is draft-ietf-behave-v6v4-xlate.
At least this should be mentioned, even if you want to keep RFC 2765
as the primary reference.

    Brian

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