[sidr] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-pki-profiles-19: (with COMMENT)

["Ben Campbell" <[e-mail]>]

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draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-pki-profiles-19: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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A few strictly editorial comments:

- IDNits complains about some undefined references.

- Abstract: Why is the phrase "(to routers within an Autonomous System)"
in parentheses?

-2: draft-ietf-sidr-bgpsec-protocol explicitly excludes non-capitalized
versions of 2119 words. This draft does not. It seems different 2119
approaches among the various bgpsec draft could be confusing to the
reader.