[Sidrops] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-sidrops-rp-06: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Mon, 06 April 2020 01:22 UTC

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Subject: [Sidrops] Erik Kline's Yes on draft-ietf-sidrops-rp-06: (with COMMENT)

Erik Kline has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-sidrops-rp-06: Yes

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COMMENT:
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{Yes}

[nits]

S4.2.2

* This is the first time ROA is really used. Consider expanding it here one
  time, or up in the introduction where it first appears in the list of RFCs.

S4.2.4

* I had some trouble parsing "but using the constraints applied come from ...".

S4.3

* s/make decision/make decisions|make a decision/

S4.4

* s/slate/stale/

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